Aww... *tear* ...baby i love it! im so lucky to have you in my life.

definately 5/5... =] *smiles*

i love you.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Just. Aww. That is so sweet. The rhyme and alteration of the "traditional" vows works so well. Congratulations, I wish you both all the best =)

5/5

Em xXx

This is such a good poem. I'm gettin married to my girl in a couple of months also. I have our wedding vowels already, but I want them to be a secret from her and she's on this site also. It's really good. And congrats! 5/5

Awe. that was beautiful. and very nicely written. :] This made me smile, which I don't do too often because I don't really have much to smile about. but I really like this. :] 5/5.

Oh my gosh, those are so sweet. any girl would be lucky to have someone as sweet as you!

Aww thats cute!! good luck with your marrage! 5/5 !props!

Thinks everyone it came from my Heart and Soul hope everyone is happy I am to have someone as Beautiful as Michelle as my Wife...

Beautifully written, once again. It's nice to know there are couples out there who are going strong and in love. This brought a smile to my face - truly lovely. :]

Aww. This is very beautiful written. It seemed like you put a lot of thought into it and wow, it was very beautiful. I can't say much more than that. Best of luck to you and your fiance. :] 5/5

Very simple but meaningful words. the last stanza is my favourite: it's so berautiful! the poem is very solemn and still so sincere