Moonlil
A very heartfelt piece. The pain of losing the one we love hurts so much.

Want to be in your arms so much
feeling your tender touch.

One day you will be reunited again. Until then hold on to your memories.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Amazing poem!
its just soo sad and heart breaking...
it was very well written...

Moonlil,

This poem has such a yearning vibe to it. I love the way you expressed yourself. The flow is great. I wonder how it would be if you were to make 4 line stanza's with the second and fourth line rhyming. Let me know when it's done, alright?(that is if you want to, of course)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This is great

You put a lot of emotion into this poem and it's amazing, excellent job
Your a very good writter
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