This was kinda like a job interview for the heart!
"Hope you know feeling
That swirl inside of me."

sounds better as
"Hope you know the feelings
That swirl inside of me."

just my two cents.
5/5

I love the idea behind this poem, it's really honest and still really sweet. One thing I would say is that in the line:

"And if this is to much,"

"to" should be changed to "too" but that's basically irrelevant, it's just me being picky haha. I really do love this poem though. My favourite part are the opening two lines, introduces the poem perfectly. 5/5

Em xXx

I liked this; it was very heartfelt and quite enjotable to read. I really like your writting syle.

5/5

Now this poem was absolutely amazing. I love the feeling in this and the flow worked so well with the poem. This is exactly the way I feel towards my fiance. Good job with it.

.:CiNdY:.

THIS POEM IS SO SIMPLE BUT YOU GET YOUR POINT ACROSS, IT WOULD EVEN BE BETTER IF PUT INTO STANZA..4/5 KEEP WRITING!!...=]

Felt like this many times before,i really like the words you used, and how you've been hurt to many times,and ask if this is just to much,i believe soo many have felt this as well,good job

The last part....!!!

"All I ask is this...
Please don't lie
And if this is to much,
Than thank you for your time. "

sounds like something i would say!!!
love it!!

Great poem keep up the good work. take care.

Short, yet simple and something i can relate to. The emotion was strong yet not sloppy or too powerful. i liked this one lots
Tara-kay