Comments : In a slow dance...

  • 16 years ago

    by Aage Crow

    Aww. This poem is so sweet and sensitive, Mr. Rhee! Loves it though it ended pretty sad... I really like the wording and the balance of the whole poem too. ^_^ Yay! Another favorite poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Love this. however id change the title to yesterday! lol
    it was really good. it was like a subtle yet screaming way to say i loved her and shes gone.... great job 5/5