5/5 great poem nik, first two paragraphs are very strong, i can feel the pain within this poem, love sure is complicated

Love definitely hurts.
wonderful poem.
5/5

Great poem, its true love can hurt and moving on is hard. Good job 5/5

Really really good poem!
Love deffinately does bring you down ..
But i guess you just have to try to move on otherwise you'll just be stuck in the past!
5/5 :)