Wow i really like this poem too. it is great and beautifully written and the emotion is great.

At that moment, I saw you around her,
Which I imagined was to my eyes just a blur,
She was cheery there with bliss,
While I was howling here with emptiness.

i love that part because i can relate to it so well.the fact that you can write peoms that relate to others is great. keep up the good work. 5/5