Awsum poem i like:Whispers my name with dark dead lips
Threatening to pull me farther away from who i once was

so vivid

Thnk u. i thought it was kinda weird.

Its really good, but my "opinion" is you can do what i do. print it out. add thoughts to it. i write witha pencil and then I think you can get 2 poems out of it. but poetry is from the heart. and it is a REALLY GREAT poem. write for you. not others