Straight up poem, the rhyming pattern is complex but u made it seem simple. 5/5.

A Very good poem. Good rhyming and a meaningful theme.

Great poem 5/5

Bryan
You make these forms look so easy :) What a wonderful job you have done on this Triquatrain. The imagery is great as are the word choices.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

I love the emotion in this poem
I also like the style
My favorite line it the last one
I can't say much about this poem other than I love it.
5/5