Comments : If he can no longer see?

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5.
    such a hard thing to deal with.
    ur poem says everything at once.
    well done its still a great poem if u dont think it is

  • 16 years ago

    by El

    Fantastic poem...so much emotion
    You could feel what you were saying!
    I love the imagery....Nothing else to say everything was great!!

  • 16 years ago

    by manic moments

    I hope to god it isnt true