Wow, very powerful poem
i like it alot

good job dude

The last part was shoking. W0W!!! u really hav improve. lov is sad. stay strong. life is too short to waste on some cheat:)

Hey! its been a while so i tought id catch up on some of your poems

this one is very good (just like all of the others) but the ending really rocks!

5/5

5/5, especially liked the last 2 paragraphs! if u remember some of my work, then u know i can def relate to that story!! keep strong, she just wasn't worth the feelings u had 4 her