It takes a lot to impress me (just because I'm mean), but you've done it. I love the first stanza. The truth it speaks is so profoundly put. The rhyme is natural and adds rhythm without sounding cheap or that the rhyme is obvious. It's inwrought with truthsso poetically put without loosing any meaning.

Stunning. Well done! Here's a favorite! 5/5

"Another cannot see,
Or ever truly fix,
The things we love to break,
Behind this wall of bricks."

this stanza was mind-blowing. another one of my favorites. breathtaking work. 5/5 :)