I voted 5 on your poem.

You a brand new writer, and you shouldn't give up on writing.

Never ever let another writer, or competitor in this site put you down, ever.

On your poems, I see a young poet discovering there first words into poetry, and I am so very proud. You are in my group and I will do all I can do get you noticed.

Practice, and practice writing. You have alot of talent, don't give up.

_[Sam]