So deep feelings and emotions i loved this poem alot

well done

Thz alot for u lovely words i will keep it up

Very nice poem, i like it ;)

All i can say is wow! i loved it! it was really deep and i can relate. u have amazing talent and u should keep writing! 5/5

Thz or the comment

Who is amr???
anyway, nice poem... I gives you 5/5

Amr is my life , the best at all, he is the man i love so much, he makes me write all this

Thz its nice to hear that u like it , i do realy love him , i think thats make my writes nice.

Evrything is false my love is true...i like that. your poems dont sound all the same.. theyre very good

Thz alot for ur comment

Thz for ur sweet comment

Huh... Who is amr ???
anyway, nice poem... Keep up this good work :)
oh by the way, Me Too... (just kiding...)

Good rhyming at the start. And good choice of words. I can feel the love you feel in this poem. 5/5

Very sweet love poem you have here. The emotions were real and I could tell this piece came straight from you heart. Well done.

You have written fantastically.I love it very much.Beautiful expression in an effective rhyme scheme.

Wow very beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it..keep writing 5/5

This is a really good poem, I think you held your emotion well in it. Once again the "u"'s and so on. Maybe break this one into stanzas as well? I'm not quite sure, it's a good poem but it seems the outlook of it isn't the best,eh.

I liked how you put this poem into your own words, and your own feelings. Good Job 5*5

Nice , all u mix it well and become a great poem ! God job