Of course its a 5.0 to me. lots of anger. just need to throw some words that only make sense to you in it. Karma kicked in my door and beat me like a witch a while back. all the wrong i did came back to me. but now i still do dumb stuff. lol

Not sure what to suggest hun, maybe just add a few more examples, like murders getting released while family still grieve for loss...ummm illness/cancer etc happening to good poeple with good lives.

i think its good the way it is because it gives the message clearly and i think everyone will agree with it. xx