Comments : All But Still Desired

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... Breathtaking.
    Metaphors within this poem are simply remarkable and your descriptions leave me in awe. Imagery of the whole poem is astounding. Very original write, too, so creative and different from anything I've read before. True poetic gem :)
    I'm truly amazed with every stanza of this piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    Hail the king.. hah, I'm feeling it.