I can sence your anger and fusteration. Very moving poem. Good job.

Note:Please excuse my spelling errors I suck at spelling lol >.<

This is great!.. way to let your feelings and emotions out.. very nicely done... a lot of people can probably relate to this.. people never want to blame themselves so they keep blaming everyone around them.. great job. keep it up =)

GOOD POEM , ITS SIMPLE BUT YOU SEEM TO GET YOUR POINT ACROSS.....5/5...KEEP WRITING!!....=]

Very interesting. I loved the enthusiasm once again and this one had a bit more imagery and more passion. Although again I think this is in the wrong section, it should have been love. But excellently done 5/5

That is excellent i cant say but them words wonted cum out my mouth

Great work...keep it up