I like this a lot, especially the beginning few lines. pretty powerful stuff. good job.

Amy x

I really like it...so meaningful

Reminds me of me. i love it.

Dear jesus, this poem hit me like a rock in the face. I've been feeling the same way for a while now and it's scary to see it in writing. The poem was amazing though. The flow was smooth and your word choice was nice.

"Who is this person within me?
Who is this stranger that crushes my dreams?
Who is this evil trying to rip through my skin?"
- I love these line. They were magnificent. Nicely done. (:

5.5
Take care,
Stephanie