Comments : BLEED!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Nice job with the ending there, isolating the word "bleed" was really effective. Overall, a well written poem, keep up the good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by waking up inside

    I love this poem its really well done. and its really sad. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    After the rain, there comes the rainbow...someday u'll see ur rainbow...miz ya gurl..xoxo...