Nice poem... Hey! man you are really nice poet... Keep up this good work :)

Hey this is very sad. i don't really like poems about death but anyways i respect your emotions so i probably won't write about the meaning;)

what i loved here was wording in some places, and also the rhythm was good. i would even say it was too dynamic for such a sad poem but maybe u used it to emphasize your pain which goes through the poem. it works.

i put 4/5