Sounds as though you really love her.

"They hold a person who I want to grasp.
Who I want to take over,
as you've taken over me."

-Feeling the love from those lines. My favorite part of it.

5/5

Wow...
I love this from the first to the last line. Whole poem is filled with beauty and priceless details within descriptions. Truly excellently written, very emotional and creative. Whole poem has good rhythm and flow and your choice of words is great.
Enjoyable read, very deep and touching.
5/5 from me

I absolutely love "Love Poems" i write alot of them myself. This was a well written,very heart felt, poem. Keep this up! Keep writting, and i will keep reading! 5/5

I honestly think that was really good!

Cute. the flow was off a little bit. the structure and rythem worked well so it made up for what you lost with the flow. amazing job. 5/5 !props!

Buetiful and sweet!sounds like u really luv this person,great poem

A beautiful piece!! I liked everything about it, the words, every sentence and I didn't mind how it flowed... it just worked with the poem! I thought you got your point across really well, and the imagery was well done as well! Keep up the amazing work!
5/5

I loved how effortlessly this flowed. The meaning behind it was immensly profound and one I could relate with. Your emotions were real and spoke deeply too me. I loved how fast paced the flow was .. it was real effective in getting your message across. Well done *5/5*

Neato, i liked it, keep it up

Wow keep writing. it was 5/5.