Wow..thats really good!
so true!
great work(:

Ahh i liked it kyle omg you write so good and you put wat u believe in on this in this wat ever..i effing loved it..well love ya ttyl=]

You make a rly good point.... i will be back on msn after a while ...

This poem was amazing i really liked it and its true to good job 5/5

WOW! thats really interesting.... very honest and yet super sad..... love love loved it!

luv ya!

mandy

Great idea, great poem, Kyle
yes, a one can't change the world but doing nothing is still not a sollution that's why your poem is important
by asking these questions you make the reader involved in what you feel
and yeah although sometimes it sounds a bit utopian (imho) like here:
"lets help out and feed the poor,
noone should steal to live,
we have hearts within us,
we have our love to give"
still the concept is soooo good. 5/5

That is soooo true!
like wow.. amazing,
i have a poem that reminds me of this one..
its called: if only.

That's so true & it hurts to read it because your words are apart of life that a lot choose ignore,,, thank u

Your so right abotu it all why can't the world be liek that without all the bad?

This is soo true. the world is corrupt.
you put it so well.
its really good

I loved it because it had such strong meaning with a very strong message!!