Comments : Whisper

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Oh, I liked this. It was kind of ery, and seems like it could be about a lot of things.

    You do have one spelling mistake I think needs pointed out:

    Third stanza, second line
    "I'm waisting my time."
    it should be "wasting".
    Just thought I should let you know about that.

    Also, I think, (and just in my opinion) it would be better suited in the "dark poetry" section.
    This seems more of a dark poem to me.

    But I rather did enjoy how it was told. kind of a "stay the hell away from me!"

    =)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    Ok I enjoyed this one..but iI kind of diddnt understand this person was being so cold.

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    I'm really wonderin who you wrote this for....it's a good poem though!