Very very good
i felt it deep down
its flowed excellently and the rymimng was wonderful!
well done!
5/5
keep it up!
xxx

I loved it,
5/5
great job and i feel the same way sumtimes,
mostly all the times but ya get my drift
great poem though i loved it

Wow, this was really great!

Hey, just gotta say I've read so many of ur poems n this ones amazing... there all amazing... I won't be surprized if u become a famous poet cuz trust me, u have the writings n thoughts 2 be one.
Ps: u should try n get ur poems published, u could make tons of money and reach other kids.

Wow....great poem......!!

I LOVE IT, one of my favorites.