Comments : A dark road full of cliche

  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Your poem is really good.
    It also explains what some people can't do.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "I twist and scream inside my head
    Bound by unspoken vows of restraint
    That waste filled bog I am well acquainted with, your torment I am not"

    I like this part of your poem most. I can relate to it. I can even see the scenery in front of me..Reminds me about Edvard Much's painting "The scream".

    Well done. :)