Ok so maybe I was a bit harsh the other day but I can't deny that your poems have improved dramatically I'm really suprised and I'm happy for you too that you've gotten so good (yes this is reli me saying this!)
your other poem *I'm so sorry* what was that about???
actually it was written really well and no rhymes were really forced but still
no one wants to read a friends poem when they're talking about ending it
if you are down, you know you drive me up the wall n i won't listen to you moan about pathetic things but if it's something serious then i am here, still
xx