I can relate to this part of the poem:
wrong choices
losing friends
killing the ties
and not being able to mend

but in a different way than how u used it. but i still think its a good poem :-)

This is a good pome good job

Oh very good dark, sinister almost threatening. I like it - its like the poem doesnt end - it leaves you hanging there just wondering what is gonna happen - great.

Kelly
xx