I like it...

This poem is a good poem. but the only thing that i have to say is that some people are willing to give up and that is what makes them suicidal.

Hm..good attempt to stop others from commiting suicide.., but also remember...not all those believe in God, like myself =\...

Smart words from a great poet, i like the little thank god part u threw in, sometimes thats all u need is to know Gods there.

good-job

[~lacie~] 5/5