This is a good poem, even though it doesnt really have a structure. I can relate to how you felt when you wrote this. I have always been the overweight girl, when all of my friends have always had a boyfriend i never did. I have had one friend that did ditch me and her other friends for her boyfriend, and i know how much it hurts when your friend does that.
Anyway, this is a good poem.5/5

Kalee

It was good. I think you could have added a little more to the story though.
If this is true, then I am sorry.
And the girl you are speaking of must not have been a true friend.
Im sorry about that. Great write. Way to get your feelings out!
5/5

Good poem...

Oh by the way 'You are perfect..."

"You tell me I am pretty, you tell me I am yours
But you lie to me and kill me, Break my heart into two."

I can relate to that.

Oh well, this is good.
I'm currently experiencing the same thing right now with my best friend.
It just sucks when the person you've known for too long would change all of a sudden.
I hope things with you && your best friend will be ok.

<3
xxx.

Great poem! I can relate to this 100%...
I know how you feel...because most of my life i have been that girl!!

I feel that this reaches out to all the big girls that have have this problem.

I can relate to your poem though im at the other end sadly, your poem has depth wich i like, transition was great 5/5

Hey good one...

You literally read my mind.
i was with my bff for 5 years, got a guy she knew, and she left, and shes mean about it.
i can relate to this

Thats really deep i like this one.
makes me think of a few of my friends.
that have let me down just because they got into a relationship.
keep strong and you will get through the hard stuff that life can through your way.
this is a great poem
5/5

Meggii