I like this one Tyler...i'm assuming it's about someone you love cutting themsevles?....not to pry of course..

Keep it up bro...kick the shit out of the darkness..

woah..i really liked this one. it describes emotion and feelings really well. great job

I loved this one too!! Wonderful job, Tyler!!! This was just incredible!!!
Luv,
Amy

I read the last two lines again an agian, they're the perfect way to end this poem, they totally complete it:) good job