Very interesting.. the way it was written made me want to keep reading to find out more about that notebook.. nice job.. keep it up!

Interesting. i love the creativity in it. It was very imaginitive and made the poem unique. Although the flow was a little hard to get in some areas but the word usage still kept me captivated. Well done 5/5

Realy nice i love it short nice words but show alot feeling good jop