Its good. You could keep it as it is, its not bad...you could add on...I think you should keep this as it is, then re-use it as a stanza In another....win win
Good poem

Misery strengthen
And memories bleed
I will follow
Where reapers lead

Death embrace
My tainted heart
Forseen your end
From my start

In mello weep
And my spilled blood
All these tears
Consume like a flood