Good job:)it was a great choice with words..

It was rather short but, good.I think tha you should capitalize the beginning of ever sentence though to make the poem seem more organized.In the first stanza, last line, I think you should change 'nothing' to "nothing's".In your last stanza,first line, you should put a comma after 'life' to better the organization again.Just a few suggestions but good poem though.

-Amber

Oh and one more thing while I'm thinking about it.You shouldn't capitalize 'kisses' it throws the flow off.

-Amber