Aww soooo sad :(...wonderful poem peep. keep up great worx^^

Hi bro
I really loved this poem n specially the repetition in it :)

Awww, Adel....

Such a sad poem, my sweet friend...
I am always here for you, don't forget!

(((big hugs)))

5/5 Ingrid

Adel,its really sad that u are going through this :( but such feelings makes u write very good poems :))))

Nice p0em its g0od

I love it... one of the best poems...

Wow what a wonderful poem...
P3@c3

Great poem, and its your fault....lol.
5/5

It's my own fault
Experiencing death alive
^^^
I love this part .... all to well do we know the times where experiencing pain makes us feel like the life as just been suck from our very being. Tearing at our souls to the point where our bodies feel lifeless.....

You have expressed emotional sadness through-out the entire piece.
I love how you wrote the poem as though in stages of your life .... with heartache and pain drizzling through your pen.

Touching read, that so many can relate to
Well done
Luanne