Awww sad but i love it...ive been there so many times....

Much better i love it even more

Awwww..this poem was so cute i liked it and you can feel your emotions in it

Beautiful! This Is A Touching Poem. My Only ProblemWith it Is That You May Want To Proofread. There were Gramatical Errors But Other then that, Nothing really Needs To Be Changed. =] I Enjoyed The Lovely Read.

Hope To See You Around!
Keep Writing!
4/5 (Grammatical Errors Brought You Down one =/ )

-Ally <3