Drowning in my own sorrow
i can see your face looking down at me
my blue eyes looking up you wishing praying
that you can save me, pull me up so i can breath again
hold me in your eyes
listen for my heart beating
you will now now i am alive

I wouldnt mind you being with me. i would like that right now lol.

I would love if you were my angle. i wouldnt mind being the one you hold in ur arms. i want to the one you hold and the reflection in your eyes.

Thats a great poem. that really gives your emotion of him, showing how the person truly is, great job. keep writing.
TiNkErBeLl

Your angle of death

i am the angle haunting your dreams
the one you see when you close your eyes
your suductive yet shy queen
but you cant touch me yet
i still surround you at night
holding you close
knowing you will never fight
when you lay in bed
alone but not cold
when you feel your skin tingle at night
when no one ese is around
ill be laying with you right by ur side
each other angles to hold at night

My fallen one

You are my angle
when you saw me crying by the lake
my last and only resting place
you walked over and lifted my head
looked into my eyes
i could tell you saw my pain and more
you saw a flame
small yet still burning
all you had to do was find the key and unlock the door
you kissed me on the lips
ever so gently
we both have nothing to loose but all to gain
now its 2 fallen angles
sitting by the lake at night
looking at the stars together
holding each other tight

i will never leave you alone
i will always be there for you
like you are there for me
i love you

Love the poem. I felt like I was there and watch the Angle fall.

5/5

~Victoria

Awww, that's so sad, I like the medaphorical phrases you used ... awsome

Whoa u relate things without really saying it and its hard 2 do that most of the time. great write!
keep it ^^!

I like it ((5))