Comments : Broken Wings

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. jesse, u def have a talent for angel poems

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    "These words are flying
    At the speed of sound
    But I wont let you go
    Til your feet touch the ground"

    wow! this is amazing. ^

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww, absolutely beautiful! i love the way it ryems with out sounding forcful. it has such a wonderful flow! 9999/5 :]
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I agree with gabby...you really have a talent jesse, and im not saying that just because i love you

    :]