This is a rly gud poem 5/5
and i kno what its like when u care about someone so much u want them to be happy even if it means theyre with someone else and you fake a smile cuz u know thats what they want
i keep tellin myself just hang in there and itll work out
hopefully it will for u
good job =)

I'll hide this broken heart and let you live your years
I'll swallow my pain and bite back the tears

that was really a great line! the whole poem was well put!
*ME*

Great job, you are amazing 5/5

Wow this is agreat poem ..I love it !

I'll hide this broken heart and let you live your years
I'll swallow my pain and bite back the tears

Great poem, I gave your 5/5.
Just one question:
How do you bite back tears ?
I want to learn this one.