Awe thats a really good write. the ending gave it a good punch. the only thing i found wrong was that u repeted the word The in the end of the 4th line, and the begining of the 5th.

nice work =]

~tia

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if you ever need anyone to talk to,
I give good advice.
:)

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if you ever need anyone to talk to,
I give good advice.
:)

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if you ever need anyone to talk to,
I give good advice.
:)

Aww im sorry..

Great poem...loved it

Aww so true im in that situation now n it sucks

Great poem.. i can relate to this... I love it. =)