Wow, this is an excellent one. best poem I've read today... I'd like to make it as a contest poem, but it's not eligible (Unfortunately). Probably I'll check your other work soon. By the way, the last stanza was my favorite. 5/5

Wow that was awsomeeeee!!!!!! =]

Great poem. the flow was perfect. and you didnt seem to strech things if you know wat i mean. also as for a persoal reason i like this poem is its written in a similer format to my poems 5/5

This one was a powerful write..

Keep it up

Favorite part was:
"Knock me to the ground,
Make me wonder why.
Tell me that you love me,
It's just another lie."
This stanza hooked me from the onset. Very nice flow and rhymes. I like how you ended it with a type of reluctant surrender. 5/5

OMG!! This poem is AMAZING! I have been through the same thing once and it feels like I could have written this! GReat job! 5/5