Comments : I know it's love

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Very sweet, especially the part about kiss. very emotional and warm-hearted.
    just a note:
    stanza 2, line 4: is it "melt"?
    stanza 3, line 3: is it "my knees"?
    anyways, these are just misprints and it doesn't matter.
    the poem left such a nice feeling in my heart! i have a lot of talent:)

  • 16 years ago

    by khobo

    I liked it, it has so much feeling in it. Love the details and descriptions. Keep it up =)