Comments : Story

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Awww, poor Guy. =/
    I could feel the emotion in this poem to its Max..I'm very sorry This happened. =/
    Hope things get better
    Keep it up though

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Its a good poem , you can tell alot of your emotions went into it but some part were hard to read but other then that is was very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Michael, told you i'll comment you sooner or later.
    im soo bored in class, lmao.

    it was a good poem.
    great flow.
    good luck with m----

    laurie (: