A nice poem, but the flow was off most times and it lacked real passion and imagery. The lines were worded ok but the poem just didnt seem satisfying. I would have to give it 4/5

I really like this poem
very clever and well written good job =)

I must admit that this poem was a breath taking piece with magnificent word choice. Sadly i must agree with Wallace though when he says there are a few parts that just seem to lack in emotion. All together it is a wonderful piece with a wonderful message that many can relate to. Keep up the good work. 4/5

Signed,
Alexander