I'll go with the good first,
I really like your punctuation.
It seems mature for someone your age.

The bad,
I honestly don't like this poem.
It's too cliched.
The best to cure cliched poems
Are none too cliched words.

But you used words that everyone else used
I dunno.

Sorry.
I hope you don't take this personally.
I'm just a really, really hard grader.

I totally disagree with eehcuhhz. I liked this poem. I can relate to this poem.