The poem was great... Just like a sorrowful lullaby ! drawing a sad end to what seemed to be an everlasting love and trend.. there are few mistakes but all in all it was great 5/5

The poem was great
and you know why ?
cause i can feel you
and u used some words that realy showed that your honest in what r you writing
it's amazing .... go on and on ...

No love can never end!!!!!!!!!!!!

moucha DON'T LET IT END!

don't u dare!

nice ending :]

5/5