This is sooo adorable. you could look at it through a child's eyes and see the simplicity. or, if you are desperate for meaning (like me!) you can find metaphors, etc, in this song. this is wonderous. i want to hug a spider...and i am afraid of spiders!!!! keep it up!

I really like it. It is very cute, and very good.

Awwwww i loved it soooo much! It was so sad that he was lonely at first but he found love! I hate spiders so much they creep me out but this poem was soooo cute!!! Halfway through i started singign it liek a nursery rhyme, very well written and wonderfully done!
love muches, cutie

Oh! my i can't tell how much i loved it..i never ever thought of such concept;well actually i never thought that even spiders get lonely...but anyhow man u did it..what a touchy and cuty poem...kids'll love it....5/5...

Wow, that's new. I don't particularly like spiders, but I see them every minute, it seems. I surely liked this poem. :) And good choice on the bug. :) 5/5