Comments : Hipperty hopperty.

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Haha
    thats funny
    liked this one so much
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Lol.
    This was too cute.
    I have never seen this side of you, but you definatly showed me that there is that funny, humerous side to you. :]
    This started off like a cute little kids poem, it was adorable.
    Great job, keep it up. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

    Awwww that was so cute i loved it.

    great work:)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael - I thought this was the longest poem about a rabbit ever, until the final important message dawned on me! lol
    It always strikes me as funny to read some of your earlier poems as your style has changed so much. However, this is a great read, has a great flow and kept me smiling and reading on!
    All the very best and I hope you are well,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Hello Ben,

      thanks for dragging this one up from the dungeons. I cringe reading the errors, but it is rather sweet and I read this to my son many times. I have always liked to get some kind of message across.