Comments : The downfall of society

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    "longing for the eternal fire
    to burn the man inside the soul"
    This is beautiful man, your writing really captured my mind and i dont know. its so good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Fantastic good poem! your parents weren't lying at all

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Dats an impressive write.... good work...