Comments : The quite white path

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Your words quench a poets heart - I really like this section of this site. There are so many good poems here - yours is one of them.. enjoyed your work. may the peaceful white path continue to bring you back where your voice can sing

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    This is a really good description. i enjoy snow and reading about it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    I love this! i'm a grammar/spelling freak though, so just to point it out, "leaves" instead of leafs in the fourth line.

    but i really enjoyed this. the "white" in the title attracted me because i use "white" as a symbol/subject in a lot of my poems. i love the connection with nature in this poem too. 5/5