I get how much it hurts. a pain like no other.

I get how much it hurts. a pain like no other.

I love your rhyme scheme and it's well worded. I love the way you end this one with:

He will pick up the broken pieces,
The entire mess left by you.

Amazingly great!!! You deserve 5/5

Kaylalalalala!!!!

any boy stupid enough to leave you should just regret the day he was born...

Though you broke me, stomped on the pieces,
I honestly hope you find happiness.
You deserve it, really, you do,
You are something that's worth the miss.

^ i adore this stanza....because i'm kind of feeling it at 2 am about a friend....

this poem is really sweet *no surprise* because it's like....forgiving. which doesn't shock me, coming from you.
once again...your sweet heart amazes me...great job, darling.

I'm sorry....I've felt that before, it's painful...

Hun,
I know how much you cared for Tyler, and I know it was hard to get over him... I also know you probably will never be totally and completly over him.
However I am also glad that you have found another, one that will as you said clean up the mess[though you are not a mess hun, I will always be here to pick you up and dust you off] left by tyler.

This was an excellent write, you are very talented.
5/5
--Elly,