Wow I feel better after that!!! :D:D:D:D:D

This poem was amazing, that all i can say.

Great job.

-Rafael

I told you not to read thiss???? thank you very muchh

This was okay. I think the use of short and long sentences made the poem hard to read. I would mayebe keep them all one length or mix them up in a better way. Not your best, keep it up though. Nik